Vanessa the butterfly by Uinisieti

L-I-W.A.L.T- To write a narrative story about tiny creatures.
Success Criteria: I can do this when  I  wrote a story about butterflies.

Once upon a time there was a butterfly name Vanessa .One day Vanessa flew to a flower garden. Suddenly a group of girl butterflies came up to Vanessa and bullied her.They said mean things to her, so she ran back home and lay in her flower bed.

Early next morning Vanessa flew back to the flower garden  because she was hungry and wanted to eat some nectar, but she was scared to  the group of butterflies who might bullied her again.

But  the mean butterflies came and said sorry to her because they were in trouble with their mother Mrs Latu. They became friends again. They played Tag and Hide and Seek and they always played  together for all seasons.
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